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as it to attract

should be something like:

as it tends to attract

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    Or simply "as it attracts" and remove the "to"
    – GhostToast
    Jul 11, 2013 at 14:42
  • Yeah, that. We were jumping on it to fit into character limit. I will edit when toscho is online because process needs two mods.
    – Rarst
    Jul 11, 2013 at 14:51
  • @GhostToast, great suggestion. I looked at what was missing, you did on what was superfluous ;)
    – brasofilo
    Jul 11, 2013 at 15:18

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Rarst has rewritten the close reason now, using @GhostToast’s suggestion, and I have approved it.

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